I’m a bit confused trying to sort out your initial itinerary against the nights booked...
Are you spending any time in Dublin at the start of the trip or heading straight to Wicklow and doing Dublin and the concert and the Saltee islands from Wicklow?
You have day 1 planned for Saltee Island - so have you got an overnight booked for the night before, or are you planning to do them as soon as you arrive in Ireland (presumably in Dublin?) This is going to take at least 2.5 hours to drive to get to the ferry. Are you arriving off a transatlanrtic flight? This is not very sensible as you will start the holiday shattered....
You only have 2 nights in Killarney but looking at your original post you have a day for Ring of Kerry and another day for Dingle. Do you need 3 nights there?
You also seem to have one too many nights for Kinvarra with the Burren and Cliffs of Moher on one day and Inishmore or Connemara on the following day. (As jjigurley says, do have a look as to whether you can combine Clifs of Moher with a boat trip to Inishmore.)
It is a pretty intensive itinerary.. Don't underestimate how long it will take you to drive between places. In the country areas, driving in Ireland is slow and will take a lot longer to cover distances than you might expect. If using google maps it is recommended to add 25% to their driving times and then add on time for stops.